Demyx Lost

Alternate title: Demyx's Lost Heart

I wanted Demyx to say something, anything, other than his shout of demise so that the audience might feel a little pity for him. This is what I came up with. Actually, I'm not sure if that's the original line I thought of for him to say, but it's pretty close. ^^ If anyone can think of a way to tweek it so that it sounds prettier, let me know

There ya go, Hanhaxn. There is my edited version of Demyx's Demise. He looks so defeated...

Even though your time was short and everyone else forgot about you, we still learned to love you.

Characters from Kingdom Hearts 2
art by me

Edit: oops. I forgot the devider bar. Aw well. I'll add that in later.
I also have to change what he says to: 'Ohhh! No way!' 'cause that's all he says when he dies. No tears, no regret, no struggle, just a laughable moan and he fades away for all eternity.

updated, slightly revised version: [link]